The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. Hindi sex It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. Would have been awesome if the paladins got their asses kicked at the end. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. I just didn’t get sucked in. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. Good job over all!«1» The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site.
