You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters? 7 comments«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. Indian sex First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. Please give us the rest of the story.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 20:20:45it was a good story and it wasnt like the most other storys where the only thing what happens is sex its like the nam says a love story and i liked it very muchanonymous readerReport 2012-11-01 03:31:17damn, another butthead that cannot write a storyanonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 00:14:36You is wonderful, keep writing. 7 comments«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. 7 comments«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it
