i love these stories and the other guy just kinda stopped half way thru. The idea of the story is good, and I applaud anyone willing to complete a story that has stopped before it was finished, but in my opinion it needs a lot of work to live up to its potential. Xxx video The idea of the story is good, and I applaud anyone willing to complete a story that has stopped before it was finished, but in my opinion it needs a lot of work to live up to its potential. There obviously needed to be a change in Narcissa and Belatrix but their basic natures have been lost, which makes the whole point of the story rather redundant. Bellatrix is supposed to be as mad as a bucket; here she is more like a kindly whore. There obviously needed to be a change in Narcissa and Belatrix but their basic natures have been
