It’s easy giving remarks, isn’t it?READERReport 2004-10-03 21:39:07English is obviously not your first language is it? XXX You did ok but you need more practice with sentence structure. Good try tho. And as for Adamon, at least Zafar Ullah tried… You did ok but you need more practice with sentence structure. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-07-09 06:13:22Keep on writing, interesting as a wholeREADERReport 2005-02-23 11:08:55My 8″ strap on will really make you wet.READERReport 2005-01-06 07:30:20THIS SHIT SUCKS WORST THEN A HARRY POTTER BOOK!READERReport 2004-10-12 10:51:37Great story. Good try tho. You did ok but you need more practice with sentence structure. Good try tho. And don’t worry about the grammar, you’ll learn. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-07-09 06:13:22Keep on writing, interesting as a wholeREADERReport 2005-02-23 11:08:55My 8″ strap on will really make you wet.READERReport 2005-01-06 07:30:20THIS SHIT SUCKS WORST THEN A HARRY POTTER BOOK!READERReport 2004-10-12 10:51:37Great story. Was pretty interesting all in all…careful with extra long paragraphs they are hard on the eyes :)«1»
