26 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-11 10:57:34Good story. 26 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-11 10:57:34Good story. tube8 Kind of makes us all wonder how full of it you really are. For instance; suit is clothing, and a suite is a set of rooms. I didn’t see one comma. Oh, btw. You don’t seem to know the difference between to, two, and too. It makes it very hard to read. Unlike most of you, I’m proud to actually sign my reviews so you know where to be a hater at next. Oh, btw. I don’t think that english is your first language. Write more please.Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-25 22:23:13To the person that “couldn’t get past chapter 3”. . . . … I pretty seriously doubt that the world will end because of a misused word in a FREE story on an adult website. I don’t think that english is your first language. Your spelling, grammar, syntax, punctuation, and word usage are horrible. kind of funny that you make that
