The Beginning Chapter 1. The Beginning Chapter 1. Porn Bwahahahaha. The Beginning Chapter 1. Classic.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-30 03:49:46a story with potential dont rush with it take your time discribing what you and your sister do to each other and make the story a little bit longer jusy getting into it when you stopedanonymous readerReport 2011-08-30 01:44:34Die you bloody wanking faggot«12» long enough for one paragraph.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 21:24:22PISS POOR WRITING, NO REAL BACK GROUND NO PLOT NO CHARACTER BUILDUP POOR SPELLING I MEAN WHAT IS “STRIVER” I THINK YOU MEAN “STIFFER” DO A TOTAL REWRITE AND USE A GOOD EDITORanonymous readerReport 2012-09-03 14:47:58Best redundant title ever. long enough for one paragraph.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 21:24:22PISS POOR WRITING, NO REAL BACK GROUND NO PLOT NO CHARACTER BUILDUP POOR SPELLING I MEAN WHAT IS “STRIVER” I THINK YOU MEAN “STIFFER” DO A TOTAL REWRITE AND USE A GOOD EDITORanonymous readerReport 2012-09-03 14:47:58Best redundant title ever. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-20 22:16:21rate what story.
