. tube8 Some people want more detail, others want stuff that isn’t in the style of ‘confessions of a voyeur’. There’s no need to take my advice, but i have been trying my hand at writing as well, and i find that while the first person perspective is difficult to manage at times, it feels better than a ‘watching from the sidelines’ perspective. Your next story should have a little more detail, and should be from the point of view of someone involved in the story itself from the beginning, not as someone who spied on them the first few times, then joined in later. 4/10 for the story, maybe a 5/10 because of effort. A creative writing class wouldn’t hurt either, but i don’t think it’s absolutely necessary. On the other hand, the effort and imagination necessary to writing fantasy stories is there, it just needs a little coaxing and some encouragement.
