It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you’ll have itREADERReport 2007-01-23 16:21:31lame…not enough description…«12» It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you’ll have itREADERReport 2007-01-23 16:21:31lame…not enough description…«12» 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-02-09 22:25:58that was wonderful you should make more of thesesanonymous readerReport 2010-08-24 20:04:51i think it was awesome i love vampires story even gay ones i also love werewolf story will there a 2nd part of the storyAnonymous readerReport 2010-05-28 13:46:05Decent story. Xnxx Keep at it.READERReport 2007-01-24 14:06:01Good first try. The small amount of character development really strengthened the story even though it was short. Keep at it.READERReport 2007-01-24 14:06:01Good first try. It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you’ll have itREADERReport 2007-01-23 16:21:31lame…not enough description…«12» It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you’ll have itREADERReport 2007-01-23 16:21:31lame…not enough description…«12» Keep at it.READERReport 2007-01-24 14:06:01Good first try. Keep at it.READERReport 2007-01-24 14:06:01Good first try. The small amount of character development really strengthened the story even though it was short.
