But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. it is ruining the story line… Indian sex you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … no more incest… you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … it is ruining the story line… the first chapter was good.. you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-14 20:58:48Nice twist with the sister being a he/she or he a guy raised as a girl. Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … You need more segues between events.«1» You need more segues between events.«1» it is ruining the story line… no more incest… the first chapter was good..
