Awesome job otherwise. Very vidid and well written.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-02 15:38:28I’m a girl and I was already squirting my pussy juices after a few minutes of reading it«12345» 52 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-03 00:04:55poor writing poor editing and no end all add up to a waste of time.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-25 16:21:36needs a good editing and the writer needs to learn where the hymen is. tube8 the hymen covers the opening of the vagina it is not several inches inside. typical underage male virgin writeranonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 23:44:02Yo Mann where the 2nd be at?Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-03 04:39:58Great story, but there were quite a few simple errors in grammer. typical underage male virgin writeranonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 23:44:02Yo Mann where the 2nd be at?Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-03 04:39:58Great story, but there were quite a few simple errors in grammer.




















