14 comments«123»READERReport 2006-04-21 20:30:39As a female i loved this story. I love reading incest/sex. Porn video RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
try again
3/10«123» 10/10READERReport 2005-05-16 02:49:4010/10READERReport 2005-05-06 20:01:38I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. 14 comments«123»READERReport 2006-04-21 20:30:39As a female i loved this story. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. 10/10READERReport 2005-05-16 02:49:4010/10READERReport 2005-05-06 20:01:38I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work! I found the grammar checker on my program I write in and kept the point of view to one person. Keep practicing. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it.
