More detail would be nice, also. Big cock Very good story. One off for the gramatical and spelling errors, three off for the lack of details«12» One off for the gramatical and spelling errors, three off for the lack of details«12» More detail would be nice, also. One off for the gramatical and spelling errors, three off for the lack of details«12» 6/10. You made a few gramatical and spelling errors, but they can be overlooked. You made a few gramatical and spelling errors, but they can be overlooked. More detail would be nice, also. 6/10. More detail would be nice, also. 6/10. Although I only got 70% chub throughout the entire thing, it was well written. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-06-12 01:55:29awesome!!! 6/10. More detail would be nice, also. Although I only got 70% chub throughout the entire thing, it was well written. More detail would be nice, also. Although I only got 70% chub throughout the entire thing,
