8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-23 21:35:41Well its way better than the other ones. Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… Eporner i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… 910«12» you don’t have very many mistakes at all! ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. Grammar is still shit.
