Where’s the sex? NOTHING!! Hindi sex Less talkin, more action. . … 11 comments«123»READERReport 2005-11-11 14:47:54Your story blew! A build up to what? Less talkin, more action. . … NOTHING!! NOTHING!! 11 comments«123»READERReport 2005-11-11 14:47:54Your story blew! WAY MORE ACTIONREADERReport 2004-09-28 01:35:17Fucking StupidREADERReport 2004-07-21 18:49:34man that sucked ass, balls, and more ass. Less talkin, more action. . … Less talkin, more action. . … a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit.«123» Do us all a favor..put the pen down and go have some real sex…then maybe you can write about it.READERReport 2005-01-04 06:45:09rubish shitREADERReport 2004-12-28 00:03:24too many damn words. NOTHING!! A build up to what? this is the worst peice of shit i have ever seen. a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit.«123»
