It has to be pretty bad before you can’t get to the end. Sex video Just wish i was In on itAnonymous readerReport 2016-01-19 15:23:51Rhiannon57, you have everything you need to improve your writing to a professional level, except: a spell checker, a grammar checker, AND A GOOD EDITOR. That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for me. Pathetic.Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-08 13:55:55Picky, picky, picky. Worst of all was the reverting of Brian’s wife into a teasing, immature, bisexual bitch. If that wasn’t enough of a disappointment, truth or dare gets thrown into the tired mix. Just wish i was In on itAnonymous readerReport 2016-01-19 15:23:51Rhiannon57, you have everything you need to improve your writing to a professional level, except: a spell checker, a grammar checker, AND A GOOD EDITOR. CoachAnonymous readerReport 2015-06-27 04:47:47I’ve just recently been reading the author’s running story line. It was dominated by, “Hey, aren’t you…” and “We’re going shopping”.
