Fix your grammar and do more chapters!anonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 16:54:27Really sexy, keep it up. Porn Fix your grammar and do more chapters!anonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 16:54:27Really sexy, keep it up. But good story. Also kaname us like 1000+ years.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 16:55:00Really sexy, keep it up. Fix your grammar and do more chapters!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-22 23:30:35What the hell happened to Zero?!!!!«12» But good story. Also kaname us like 1000+ years.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 16:55:00Really sexy, keep it up. Fix your grammar and do more chapters!anonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 16:54:27Really sexy, keep it up. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-27 20:49:33Good but in a way it stunk.I mean,father kicked him out?Stupid!Oh yeah,grammer needs fixing.Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-25 23:31:32Improve grammar, you didn’t capture kaname’s personality at all. But good story. Fix your grammar and do more chapters!anonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 16:54:27Really sexy, keep it up. Fix your grammar and do more chapters!anonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 16:54:27Really sexy, keep it up.
