It should have been played out as a girl would not get into sex as fast as she did even with Mom there. Over all a good story but the plot needs work.«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-17 18:38:23btilliantAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-30 08:37:16While your action moves a bit too fast, I enjoyed the story very much. Indian sex It should have been played out as a girl would not get into sex as fast as she did even with Mom there. It made it seem they conspired to get the daughter involved. Also Mom gave in too quickly. Over all a good story but the plot needs work.«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-17 18:38:23btilliantAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-30 08:37:16While your action moves a bit too fast, I enjoyed the story very much. It made it seem they conspired to get the daughter involved. It made it seem they conspired to get the daughter involved. They should have seduced her slower.
