Not to mention if you don’t like these kind of stories DON’T read them and then spout PURE shit.ninjacopReport 2010-07-14 19:33:52i know im a bad writer.my spelling and grammar sucks ass. Indian sex I would highly recommend that you continue writing but PLEASE find an editor program to assist you in the future.«123» i simply wrote a story from my past to let go of it. so even if u do call the cops they can’t do a thing.plus if u are so against this kind of stuff why did u read it? It has already been pointed out that your story flow is to fast and you do not take the time to develop your segment scenes. That makes you a dumbshit in my book. most of this is true some parts are a little stretched. Your grammar is on a 3rd grade level and your over all composition and editing are nonexistent.
