You should go back to reread, rewrite, and take into consideration that you have to use the correct grammar, the correct punctuation, and correct English. A rewrite would get a 9 or a 10.READERReport 2007-06-26 20:43:48damn that was a good story but you need to get back with mom so she can stay happy 10/10«12» It takes more than that. Japanese sex 6 comments«12»READERReport 2008-02-01 15:30:40Good story, sorry the wife was killed,but should take up with the mother and get her pregnut.READERReport 2007-08-16 05:07:20hot videoREADERReport 2007-07-25 10:58:22should have left the story with the possibility of more encounters with mom.READERReport 2007-06-27 05:34:56Didn’t get psst about the 7th paragraph. I dislike reading something that is so poorly written even though the content is good. A rewrite would get a 9 or a 10.READERReport 2007-06-26 20:43:48damn that was a good story but you need to get back with mom so she can stay happy 10/10«12» A rewrite would get a 9 or a 10.READERReport 2007-06-26 20:43:48damn that
