8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE. . Indian sex …STOP. . …WRITING!!!!!!! Please don’t continue«12» Before the first sentence the story had potential.. Before the first sentence the story had potential.. Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! You write like a half retarded twelve year old.. Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school. …or…are you still in school?? This was pathetic! This was pathetic! Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school. …or…are you still in school?? Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school. …or…are you still in school?? How the hell did u even GET an account – thru ur daddy? Before the first sentence the story had potential..
