She’s got a terrific sense of humor and I love her sarcasm. XXX I’m really looking forward to reading more of this story.kelly garriott waite recently posted..[]Anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 09:42:50Really great writing. So well done. The powers, the mutants…all coming together to create a really interesting story. I’m really looking forward to reading more of this story.kelly garriott waite recently posted..[]Anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 09:42:50Really great writing. Cya later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2012-02-07 05:33:58I loved this–most eiepcsally the uncertainty of it. She’s got a terrific sense of humor and I love her sarcasm. The use of the passive voice when she made her tea felt distant and pulled me away. A couple of things threw me: James wants to meet at Central Park – Even though it’s been damanged in this piece, Central Park is huge. A couple of things threw me: James wants to meet at Central Park – Even though it’s been damanged in this piece, Central Park is
