Nonetheless, you seem to have a decent hand. XXX including the thunder storm? Keep it up.«12» You need to flesh out the charectors a little, i.e. They planned it? including the thunder storm? and who owns a croset these days? and who owns a croset these days? In some ways you have the skills, you just need a better story. wow, their good! Nonetheless, you seem to have a decent hand. 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-13 13:33:50At the comment on 2008-07-02 at 14:40:19…how about he just fucks them and enjoys it without getting them pregnant and having 27 kids between the two of them? wow, their good! Nonetheless, you seem to have a decent hand. making the 15 yo girls a little insecure, adding some physical quirks, something to make them more real.
