It’s hard to enjoy the “flow” unless the story is well told. I liked it. XXX …And this is one of the better ones.READERReport 2004-02-27 12:52:19Your story plot was amusing, however, you need to pay more attention to structure. …And this is one of the better ones.READERReport 2004-02-27 12:52:19Your story plot was amusing, however, you need to pay more attention to structure. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-05-08 16:49:00i just thought you should know, I love your stories. I liked it. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-05-08 16:49:00i just thought you should know, I love your stories. It’s hard to enjoy the “flow” unless the story is well told. I’m assuming that the sequel will include a three-way with all of the characters. …And this is one of the better ones.READERReport 2004-02-27 12:52:19Your story plot was amusing, however, you need to pay more attention to structure.
