There should be another part, otherwise it’s too sad an ending for such a great story.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-04 20:20:05you should make a sequel, after bobbi reaches 18… XXX Also, there is no injunction that her dad could get besides a restraining order, and that would only last until she’s 18. And even that wouldn’t work unless he’s more than 2 years older than her, which seems unlikely given what year he is in college. then you proceed to use Another five pages to describe the same fucking thing damn man you are a much better writer than that! then infer that somehow a seventeen year old would think you were some kind of adonis? Still, great story overall. There should be another part, otherwise it’s too sad an ending for such a great story.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-04 20:20:05you should make a sequel, after bobbi reaches 18… Overall, if the story had ended before the email from her dad I
