its too short. this is a story not a movie details help the readers to involve in the scene as if they are watching it (some may masturbate) try to concentrate in ur next story also ur sex partner didn’t say much asif he is a machine. tube8 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff. its a good story I liked it.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 13:36:15waaaaaaaaay toooooooooooo shoooooooorrrrrrrttttt!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 22:21:19build up to it a little bit more…it seemed like one minute you had neighbors and next you were giving a blowjob?
