or just an extra blank line, *something*, makes it confusing and hard to follow; also, I swear half of your sentences aren’t complete. or just an extra blank line, *something*, makes it confusing and hard to follow; also, I swear half of your sentences aren’t complete. XXX I like the idea though.«123» I like the idea though.«123» Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 20:53:36hTY5Bz Develop the topic further! I like the idea though.«123» I like the idea though.«123» Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 20:53:36hTY5Bz Develop the topic further! “Wait… 14 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 20:57:48UuZ9Gs Very neat article.Thanks Again. The idea was awesome, but the terrible grammar and structure killed the turnon. It is interesting to know more details..!!anonymous readerReport 2011-07-22 22:08:26Very hard to follow.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-31 16:35:35Yes, the lack of transition…




















