Mainly due to grammar, spelling, and the like. i cummed a little!~!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-01-04 13:16:51It seems a bit rushed. tube8 i cummed a little!~!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-01-04 13:16:51It seems a bit rushed. It seemed almost abstract like you were talking about someone else, not Kagome and Inuyasha. Mainly due to grammar, spelling, and the like. Awesome story ☺Could use a bit more detail but otherwise epic!Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-10 21:46:00I thought her name was kagome not kigome.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 19:22:08i loved it i did not get some sentences but my dick go longeranonymous readerReport 2013-01-28 23:18:16hey good awesome!! It seemed almost abstract like you were talking about someone else, not Kagome and Inuyasha. The sex was fine, but I was having trouble with the flow of the story. All in all, I give this piece a 4 out of 10.«12»
