28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. Eporner The storyline is opressively trite and it’s filled with minucia.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 23:52:18The basic story is good, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. 28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. 28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. Women need to stop shaving their pubes. It’s not were, it’s we’re for we are, Mom peeked around the door, not peaked, the story is full of such mistakes and they make it hard to read. The storyline is opressively trite and it’s filled with minucia.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 23:52:18The basic story is good, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. It’s not were, it’s we’re for we are, Mom peeked around the door, not peaked, the story is full of such mistakes and they make it hard to read.
