You could also try to imagine this is someone’s story that you’re reading. Xvideos How does it sound to you? 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-19 14:41:38I’ll agree with the fact that your grammar effected your story. Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» Keep it coming, you’ll get better as you go on. I got so tired of translating what you said, into what you must have meant, that I lost interest in the story.senorlongoReport 2011-03-04 23:40:28I have several stories on this site and I’m glad to pass along some of what I have learned from experience. I usually spend 25% writing and 75% editting. The story plot is interesting, but all the misspellings and wrong use of words was so distracting that I didn’t bother to finish the story.
