Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Xnxx Terrificly written. Terrificly written. Even someone who is submissive I dont think would break so easy. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» However. Very few spelling and punctuation errors. Terrificly written. However. Very few spelling and punctuation errors. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Very few spelling and punctuation errors. However. Terrificly written. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Terrificly written. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Very few spelling and punctuation errors. However. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1»
