12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-29 21:04:10have to agree not worth reading without PARAGRAPHS PARAGRAPHS PARAGRAPHSanonymous readerReport 2012-07-04 20:54:39Please forget part 2. Great story line. Eporner You said the second part was coming out “in a couple days” you said that 2 fucking months ago!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-04-17 00:06:20Off not of. If you know anyone who has some grammatical and spelling ability, ask him or her to proof-read your stuff BEFORE inflicting it on the public.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-19 21:27:11What the fuck? If you need someone to read over your stuff, just ask, most people are willing to help out. Keep going. Keep going. I mean everything. I second the emotion of ending a sentence with a period, not a camma. Great story line.
