Better still, just don’t post it at all.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-01 01:30:09Bad story, don’t want to see part two until you learn how to properly differentiate between characters, describe a scene, and use punctuation.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 14:33:52″ Kendra, my wife, Beckah’s sister” this was very confusing. Or fix it in a better way.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 13:53:46punctuation is your friend, you should try it sometime«12» but I couldn’t understand why there was an ‘
But reading farther I realized Kendra was the sister.. Xvideos At first I thought Kendra was your wife and Beckah was your wife’s sister.. This is AWFULLY poor writing. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-18 23:59:16Cool story stop being a bunch of dick…have fun relax good job authoranonymous readerReport 2013-12-01 01:37:54Did you skip your punctuation classes entirely? You should finish school before you try to write.
