Just trying to help. Eporner Great story though, overall.redoctReport 2010-06-17 18:03:20outside of some grammatical and spelling problems, they were not enough to detract from the well written story. Great story though, overall.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-28 22:42:58Just so you know, painful and lustful and other similar words have only one L at the end. Get her pregnant and make her your serious and constant lover.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-28 23:28:49Just so you know, painful and lustful and other similar words have only one L at the end. Get her pregnant and make her your serious and constant lover.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-28 23:28:49Just so you know, painful and lustful and other similar words have only one L at the end. 2
dd«123» Great story though, overall.redoctReport 2010-06-17 18:03:20outside of some grammatical and spelling problems, they were not enough to detract from the well written story.
