This is because there really is little to no description on the main character at all. Hindi sex Does that mean he has long hair, short hair, female breasts, wide hips, and slender legs? Again plot is good, and the story flows alright. I see him as a boy with fairly feminine features, maybe a girlish ass. I also liked your reference of Sasuke, which I’m guessing your referring to Sasuke Uchiha from the anime series Naruto. Again, I’m not trying to be a Bitch in any way, I’m just critiquing your work to try to make you a better writer.AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:37:22So, this is the third in the series. Again plot is good, and the story flows alright. Again, description is a little better, grammar is still absolutely terrible, and I have no idea what the character, who I’m guessing is Ellen, looks like. However, I can’t stress this enough, character description is the difference between your


















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