Keep trying and I’m sure you can become a fine writer.,. You get an “F” on endings. tube8 Like I do with my brother. Good luck!anonymous readerReport 2013-06-07 19:25:48please continue this story for the love of god !!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-06-07 00:19:50Gee’s that chapter was way to freakin’ short. So I hope part 3 is a bit longer and full of fuckin’ here and there and everywhere. I nice slow suck that makes him suffer a little, so that when he does cum, it’s well worth it. Like I do with my brother. You get an “F” on endings. I still give you a Positive on your general work. The kid’s mother could’ve been suckin’ his dick while they watch TV. Keep trying and I’m sure you can become a fine writer.,. I still give you a Positive on your general work.
