Plus, the story was plain stupid!READERReport 2006-10-20 01:46:56gayREADERReport 2006-09-10 11:01:00Fucking stupid. Porn You only wish that happened you sad little bitch.«12» You only wish that happened you sad little bitch.«12» You only wish that happened you sad little bitch.«12» It’s a simple matter of proofreading, using SpellCheck, and careful rewriting.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-10 19:54:26Did you ever go to school? It’s a simple matter of proofreading, using SpellCheck, and careful rewriting.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-10 19:54:26Did you ever go to school? 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-02 18:25:47Your story is greatAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-21 05:20:31You’ve got the basics of a good story here, but the grammar and spelling need work. It’s a simple matter of proofreading, using SpellCheck, and careful rewriting.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-10 19:54:26Did you ever go to school? Because your grammar & spelling suck!




















