A spell check run would have caught many errors. Def would have hurt you.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-26 06:07:11Please proof your story. Bokep indo You should definitely make a part two. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. A spell check run would have caught many errors. But 1 thing is you said she was a virgin so no matter she would have felt pain when that guy rammed his dick in her pussy.
