Nothing erotic, nothing to get even vaguely hard with. Instead of dumping us into the meddle of a scene, try building a real story. XXX Nothing erotic, nothing to get even vaguely hard with. You could have done a lot with this story, but you wimped out and gave us three minute drivel. This was just a snapshot in time. Was it even that long? 7 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-28 07:54:38i wanted a hard on but barely got flaccid.READERReport 2008-03-09 16:05:11It’s all been said. Complete crap in fact. The writer should get back to his /her day job of garbage collector.«12» You could have done a lot with this story, but you wimped out and gave us three minute drivel. Complete crap in fact.
