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David went to the side door, took hold of the knob and slowly entered the garage. His mind was racing. The characters, locations and incidents in this story are fictional. Mama liked to sleep late on the weekend, so he made himself a bowl of Frosted Flakes and plopped down in front of the TV to watch some cartoons. He would have spent the time talking to his seatmate, but it was a girl! “Don’t worry. David was beginning to look forward to taking his turn. While you’re waiting, take your pants off and have some fun.”
David stared at the commotion in the room as he began to unbuckle his belt.
