delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. Porn hd personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. WHERE ARE THEY? WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer. HOW OLD ARE THEY? YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? A longer build up would help, i.e. where is the background and character development? I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2.
