You desperately need an editor.Bigguy500Report 2019-12-27 15:53:05Good story line. tube8 Please continue your work!«12345» Your writing is incredible . CHYOA . So good . So good . ComAnonymous readerReport 2017-01-22 07:39:26Re reading for the 3rd time over in 2017 and still as great as ever! So good . CHYOA . You desperately need an editor.pk2curiousReport 2019-06-12 16:01:18Totally captivated me . ComAnonymous readerReport 2017-01-22 07:39:26Re reading for the 3rd time over in 2017 and still as great as ever! Thank you .Wolf_KnightReport 2018-04-17 03:31:56I am moving my stories to another site to work on them more slowly as well as to allow others the ability to add to them as well. Thank you .Wolf_KnightReport 2018-04-17 03:31:56I am moving my stories to another site to work on them more slowly as well as to allow others the ability to add to them as well.
