As for this story see my comments on your other story, they apply to both. Keep writing. Eporner Keep writing. I did not see one.countrycadillacReport 2015-09-21 17:06:51Anonymous readers always leave stupid remarks that seem written by a ten year old. Does this amazing woman have a name? Maybe you can find someone to help you edit your stories after writing them; I know that there are people who will do this for free. I did not see one.countrycadillacReport 2015-09-21 17:06:51Anonymous readers always leave stupid remarks that seem written by a ten year old. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-24 00:10:25@Anonymous reader 2015-09-25 17:20:55 Earlier on he lists that her name is Lisa. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-24 00:10:25@Anonymous reader 2015-09-25 17:20:55 Earlier on he lists that her name is Lisa. I had to give up on this story halfway through, it gave me a headache.
