12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-18 20:18:34THE BEST THING YOU CAN DO IS DELETE IT AND START OVER FROM THE BEGINNING. WHO ARE THEY? Eporner WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. WHO ARE THEY? DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? WHO ARE THEY? I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. A longer build up would help, i.e. Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very good start but keep this story going.«123» Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer.
