Try to learn writing techniques BEFORE attempting to write. Bokep indo Try to learn writing techniques BEFORE attempting to write. Very disappointing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-09 01:09:54Umm… Nice work!«12» But great story otherwise. Nice work!«12» All that blood and gore was totally unnecessary. Misspelled words and awful sentence structure. Nice work!«12» Get real or get lost.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-01 04:00:35I’d definitely like to see a part three.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-06 12:02:15You lost me with the blood and torture. I don’t think that you know what you are writing about. All that blood and gore was totally unnecessary. Misspelled words and awful sentence structure. At least ask a literate person to proof-read your stuff before inflicting it on the public. I wasn’t a big fan of the blood. Misspelled words and awful sentence structure. Misspelled words and awful sentence structure. I’d like to see her do it with some of the other animals also.
