That’s just disgusting. And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. Hindi sex Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting.
