Then, a little more description, not just what you were wearing, but how about your make up too? Sex video shud have had LOTs more flirting/build up n detail!READERReport 2004-04-05 20:16:56The story was too short,no build up.«12» Do some more. That would be HOT!!!!READERReport 2004-04-17 09:32:36potential. Well, say more about life in the straight and narrow, set up the contrast more, as well as the motivation to be a slut for the night. Then draw out the seduction more, and the sex.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-09 07:03:52Last one to utilize this is a reottn egg!READERReport 2004-06-09 12:59:52Good story!!! Then, a little more description, not just what you were wearing, but how about your make up too? You just say, you’re a good girl. Then draw out the seduction more, and the sex.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-09 07:03:52Last one to utilize this is a reottn egg!READERReport 2004-06-09 12:59:52Good story!!! Then, a little more description, not just what you were wearing, but how about your make up too?
