But there is still quite a bit of potential here. Don’t be afraid of using words and putting detail into things, tell us every movement, every thought going through the characters head. XXX Please by all means continue, I am interested in what could happen next!«1» This story wasn’t enough to even get me going as there was less detail the back of a cereal box but like i said, there is a ton of potential here for you to make an amazingly sexy story. Please by all means continue, I am interested in what could happen next!«1» But there is still quite a bit of potential here. Don’t be afraid of using words and putting detail into things, tell us every movement, every thought going through the characters head.
