Keep practicing. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work! Hindi sex I love reading incest/sex. I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work! If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
try again
3/10«123» 14 comments«123»READERReport 2006-04-21 20:30:39As a female i loved this story. Thanks for all the advice and be well.READERReport 2005-05-06 13:39:22Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. I love reading incest/sex. Thanks for all the advice and be well.READERReport 2005-05-06 13:39:22Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. 10/10READERReport 2005-05-16 02:49:4010/10READERReport 2005-05-06 20:01:38I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling.
