It’s also odd how you forget apostrophes for words like her’s. XXX Yours Truly. Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 22:23:505UO9eC Im obliged for the article post.Really thank you! If it’s only a fantasy story, make yourself taller, change the daughter’s name to Mindy or Wendy, explain what is wrong with your son (ie Bi-polar or ??)
Not a BAD story – just needs some improvement.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-11 02:18:40For the most part it’s a decent story from what I read but could be better. J.A.G«1» Break down the sentences into manageable chunks. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-28 18:37:478XlROj I loved your article.Much thanks again. Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 22:23:505UO9eC Im obliged for the article post.Really thank you! Very long diatribes bore most people shitless, and bored people can be less than complimentary in their assessments of your writing style.
