HE HUGGED THE WOMAN AND WALKED OUT THE DOOR IS A BAD BREAK IN SEQUENCE«1» Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. Japanese sex Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. Boats are for bathtubs and rubber duckys! I’m not asking for impeccable grammar, but it was just bad.robbiexxReport 2009-10-23 16:05:57AUTHOR RAMLES ON TOO MUCK.
